tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7970881348970448030.post635931041588588099..comments2022-12-12T01:56:24.193+13:00Comments on Judah: My mum and nanPES Blogs Admin 2014http://www.blogger.com/profile/15710822352595092146noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7970881348970448030.post-36412671597642348052014-06-18T10:45:36.610+12:002014-06-18T10:45:36.610+12:00I have 4 thing to change my writing number 1 my se...I have 4 thing to change my writing number 1 my sentence don't make sense number <br />number 2 full stops and capital letters for sentence with only 1 idea <br />number 3 complex detailed sentences as simple.<br />and number 4 was juicy word. Judahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11977144905934232575noreply@blogger.com