Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I relax near the oak tree having lunch with my friend. Fish and chips , burgers ,chicken , chocolate and lollies.
Thursday, 25 September 2014
Creative spring writing.
Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.
The oak tree was very beautiful and the sky was bright.
Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I relax near the oak tree having lunch with my friend. Fish and chips , burgers ,chicken , chocolate and lollies.
Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I relax near the oak tree having lunch with my friend. Fish and chips , burgers ,chicken , chocolate and lollies.
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