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Wednesday 4 February 2015

Holiday highlight.

WALT:

In the  holiday went going to the movies. We went to see big hero 6. First we had to get the tickets. Second we went to pak n save to get food. After that we quickly went back and then watch the movie.


11 days later

Yeah its my dads birthday We got to go to the arcade. We got to play lots of games. After that we played pool table.  when we finish we went home then I played the game with my dad.


My favourite part was going to the beach with my family cause it's hot every day.
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We wrote about our holiday highlight. We had to put detail in our writing so it can be amazing

3 comments:

  1. Awesome writing Judah. I like how you've ordered your ideas into paragraphs. Sounds like you had a great holiday!

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  2. Hi Honey - your writing is improving, Well done :) Im glad you enjoyed your holidays at home, at the beach the weather was really good for us these holidays. Keep up the great work. Love Mum :)

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  3. good start Judah It sounded like you had a good holiday. by johnamonbrow

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