WALT: - Write a story from a character
Once there was a boy named Jacob. He is special because, he was born with dog ear. Jacob is the only sibling in his family. Jacob and his family lives in Auckland new Zealand in Glen innes, Jacob is Samoan and Tongan. Jacob was the 2nd richest teenager in the world, because of his hit song silver shock. He was so rich he gets 10 million dollars every time someone plays his song.
Jacob lives in a mansion in May bury street. All the kids would come to his house just to get money. He gave each house 10 grand so they can buy them self a new house, food and lots of clothing.
Jacob’s song got old no one liked it anymore. Silver shock was a dead end. Jacob got no money he went poor. Jacob had no money, his mansion was gone he started to live in the street. Rich people started bullying me because I’m poor.
Hi Judah
ReplyDeleteThe narrative story that you wrote about Jacob was amazing. I liked it how Jacob did not only think about himself, looking after the people in the hood. LOOK ALIVE & SILVER Shock are pretty good titles.Keep it up!