3 years ago there was a man named Justus. He was the best farmer In New Zealand. Justus lives with his wife and two kids named Judah and Siaosi. Growing up Justus dream job was to work for the military and protect the country of New Zealand. But instead he became a farmer.
Working as a farmer is real hard. You have to feed the dogs, go hunting, shearing sheep and more. Down where he stays was so quiet that you can hear your own farts. But all of a sudden something hit Justus mind.
Justus said that he was done being A farmer. He was sick in tired of doing the same things over and over. So he applied to work in the military. A few days later he got a email from war chief Wiseman saying thank you soldier for applying for this role see you next week. Justus was exited.
Justus got to the military base and spotted war chief Wiseman. War chief Wiseman said you're kicked out soldier we have to much people that have improved In two day so sorry. Justus was heartbroken he came back home and said to his wife i'm staying to be a farmer for the of his life.
Kia Ora Judah,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. I guessed it was a narrative. It was so interesting and heart braking. But it was still very cool to read. You're such a good writer. I really loved the ending though because it was really interesting and it pulled me in.