The story of Justus.

3 years ago there was a man named Justus. He was the best farmer In New Zealand. Justus lives with his wife and two kids named Judah and Siaosi. Growing up Justus dream job was to work for the military and protect the country of New Zealand. But instead he became a farmer.

Working as a farmer is real hard. You have to feed the dogs, go hunting, shearing sheep and more. Down where he stays was so quiet that you can hear your own farts. But all of a sudden something hit Justus mind.

Justus said that he was done being A farmer. He was sick in tired of doing the same things over and over. So he applied to work in the military. A few days later he got a email from war chief Wiseman saying thank you soldier for applying for this role see you next week. Justus was exited.

Justus got to the military base and spotted war chief Wiseman. War chief Wiseman said you're kicked out soldier we have to much people that have improved In two day so sorry. Justus was heartbroken he came back home and said to his wife i'm staying to be a farmer for the of his life.

Writing test edit.

WALT - Edit our writing.
This week for our writing we had to make a copy of our writing test and had to edit it. I  have found this A bit hard because I had to read threw my writing to find all of my mistakes that I have made. 

Unedited writing

What's the point in having a special place. Is it a good place for peace and quiet? Our is it a place to chill with your mates. Well today i'm going to explain where’s my special place and why it’s special to me.

Pt england school is my special place because of the leadership opportunities, sports games, the visitors and even learning. This year at pt england school I am a house captain for te aurere the red house and i'm even the kapa haka leader for 2017.

Why is it so special you ask?

Pt england is very special because of the kind people I hang out with and even the awesome teachers.

This special place is awesome because we have chromebooks instead of books, reserve and our very own beach.

So now I have told you where special place is and why.

Edited writing 

What's the point in having a special place? Is It a good place for peace and quiet? Our Is It a place to chill with your mates? Well today I'm going to explain where’s my special place and why It’s special to me.

Pt England School is my special place because of the leadership opportunities, the visitors and even learning. This year at Pt England School I am a house captain for Te Aurere the red house and I'm even the kapa haka leader for 2017.

Pt England is very special because of the kind people I hang out with and even the awesome teachers. This place is special because we get our very own Chromebooks instead of books, Our own reserve and a beautiful beach.

Water wise

WALT - I make sense of new information before, during and after reading by connecting it to myself, texts I know and my world.

This week in my literacy class we were learning about water wise. I learnt that water can clean out your inside waste. You can survive much longer with out food but not drinking water. 

Pseudoscience

For a while now... Room 1 literacy and I are learning about what Pseudoscience is and how it effects people. Pseudoscience means "Fake science" and advertisers use pseudoscience to trick people into their product. Read carefully and understand how pseudoscience affects          people including you.For a while now... Room 1 literacy and I are learning about what Pseudoscience is and how it effects people. Pseudoscience means "Fake science" and advertisers use pseudoscience to trick people into their product. Read carefully and understand how pseudoscience affects          people including you.

Narrative writing

WALT: - Write a story from a character

Once there was a boy named Jacob. He is special because, he was born with dog ear. Jacob is the only sibling in his family. Jacob and his family lives in Auckland new Zealand in Glen innes, Jacob is Samoan and Tongan. Jacob was the 2nd richest teenager in the world, because of his hit song silver shock. He was so rich he gets 10 million dollars every time someone plays his song.

Jacob lives in a mansion in May bury street. All the kids would come to his house just to get money. He gave each house 10 grand so they can buy them self a new house, food and lots of clothing.

Jacob’s song got old no one liked it anymore. Silver shock was a dead end. Jacob got no money he went poor. Jacob had no money, his mansion was gone he started to live in the street. Rich people started bullying me because I’m poor.

But one man gave me 2 million dollars at that man was Rob Wiseman. He was the richest man in the world. He owns the whole of new Zealand. Rob Wiseman told Jacob if he want stay with him for a couple of nights. Jacob made a new song called LOOK ALIVE. Look alive was so amazing he got 20 million dollars every time someone listen to it. Jacob became rich he got his house back ,he gave a extra 5 grand to the other houses and his, family moved back in and Jacob lived happy ever after. The End

Magnus the Magnificent narrative writing

Magnus the Magnificent

Orientation:

Once upon a time there was a boy named Magnus. He lived in a town named Springfield with his mum and dad. Magnus is the only child. Magnus is an handsome young man that loved playing with his ninja stars and his large swords. At 12 am thursday the 2nd of August magnus was famous for killing a minotaur that was trying to destroying his home town . He got millions of money but instead of using the money to himself . He gave it to his family and to pay the bill for his big house. Every time magnus went out Magnus got called magnus the magnificent he would smile then start taking photos with them.

Magnus the magnificent had photos of him on the web, billboards, taxis, and houses. 1 week later he found emails on his laptop that had good news.

Magnus had the opportunity to meet Queen Elizabeth, The first family, the 2015 and 2016 nba winners the cleveland cavaliers, golden state warriors and even meet the famous Mr Wiseman. Magnus decided to go to mr wiseman because he is more famous from the others. Magnus got first class to see Mr Wiseman. Mr wiseman lives in hawaii with his wife and daughter. He is very famous for bringing back the olympics in 2016.

Problem:

When Magnus got to hawaii Mr wiseman yelled out Magnus! Magnus! Come quick, Magnus was confused Mr wiseman was wise he called Magnus just on time. Magnus ask what's the problem

There is 1 minotaur and he wanted you. They forced me to called you our else or else said magnus

I’ll die.

Good thing you called me SO WHERE IS THE 1 MINOTAUR! He is at honolulu

Solution:

Magnus had to put on his ninja suit, take out his two swords to attach to his back and his 10 ninja stars. Magnus left, He went to honolulu the minotaurs name is franky the franktastic. Franky is the best minotaur in the world. Magnus had to go because he’s was gonna destroy hawaii and he was the hardest and he was the brother that destroyed springfield. When Magnus got there He spotted franky he was in the sea waiting for him to come. As magnus came over the minotaur saw him running with his swords.

The minotaur grabbed the two swords and threw it away. Magnus was not scared she ran and threw punches but the franky blocked it. All of a sudden Franky pull out a gun and started shooting. Magnus dove under water and started thinking. She was thinking about how could she take franky down then she got the idea. She quickly jumped out of water and grabbed his ninja stars and starts throwing them it went thru the heart and out of the back. Magnus had killed another minotaur. And then magnus and the people in honolulu and even mr wiseman and his family lived happily ever after The End.

The BFG

Last term out literary teacher Mr Wiseman read us the Roald Dahl BFG book. Yesterday our literary class and some our people went to see the new release BFG movie. I think that this movie was better then the book because they put more ideas then the book and its better watching than a person reading to you. My favourite character was the BFG because he looked after Sophie and hes very good at camouflaging in the dark and in the day time.

The movie was different then the book because some parts in the movie was not in the book. The parts that wasn't there was the giants getting dropped of at a island with no food only snozz-cumber and snozz-cumber seeds, Sophie didn't drop her blanket, she had no glasses, they added a boy that the BFG looked after but then he got eaten by the other giant.

Muscle Fatigue

This week our group the spiders have been learning about muscle fatigue. We had to read the story complete the presentation and create a poster. I have learnt that when you pull your arm the triceps stretching and biceps relaxs.    

Kevin Durant moving too the golden state warriors.

Kevin Durant has made his decision and leave the Oklahoma city thunders and move to the golden state warriors. Kevin Durant is a four time scoring champ who was named MVP. The team Kevin Durant picked is the one that has rejected him last month's NBA finals. The golden state warriors went to a loss against the the Cleveland cavaliers in the seventh game of the NBA finals.

Even though it too soon to know how Kevin Durant will fit in the team, It gives him enough time to boast up his confidence and get to know the team well. I think Durant want to be in the golden state warriors just because they were in the NBA finals two times.

Panikiniki

Our group the Spiders have been reading about Panikiniki. Its about a family creating a boat thats sails to motu kotawa.

Mihi

Hi this is me, I am Tongan, Niue, Samoan and Maori. I love nike's and the NRL Warriors. I also love the Golden state warriors. I love spending time with my family and playing with my friends. Hope you enjoyed.

Can I afford it

Walt: understand money as decimal numbers.

How to make a paper cup

We have been learning to write instructions. The had to have a title, a list of things you need, the steps yo make your item and pictures to go with them. Here are my instructions for how to make a paper cup.

Judah Sunday Market SL- Part 2

A white elephant sale is a collection of old stuff. Its sells free stuff that has been kept for centuries from a person. The white elephant sale is all about giving old things away to other people.

Creative spring writing.

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.

The oak tree was very beautiful and the sky was bright. 

Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view,chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. I relax near the oak tree having lunch with my friend. Fish and chips , burgers ,chicken , chocolate and lollies.