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Monday, 5 December 2016

Pseudoscience














For a while now... Room 1 literacy and I are learning about what Pseudoscience is and how it effects people. Pseudoscience means "Fake science" and advertisers use pseudoscience to trick people into their product. Read carefully and understand how pseudoscience affects          people including you.For a while now... Room 1 literacy and I are learning about what Pseudoscience is and how it effects people. Pseudoscience means "Fake science" and advertisers use pseudoscience to trick people into their product. Read carefully and understand how pseudoscience affects          people including you.

Friday, 2 December 2016

Narrative writing

WALT: - Write a story from a character
Once there was a boy named Jacob. He is special because, he was born with dog ear. Jacob is the only sibling in his family. Jacob and his family lives in Auckland new Zealand in Glen innes, Jacob is Samoan and Tongan. Jacob was the 2nd richest teenager in the world, because of his hit song silver shock. He was so rich he gets 10 million dollars every time someone plays his song.

Jacob lives in a mansion in May bury street. All the kids would come to his house just to get money. He gave each house 10 grand so they can buy them self a new house, food and lots of clothing.

Jacob’s song got old no one liked it anymore. Silver shock was a dead end. Jacob got no money he went poor. Jacob had no money, his mansion was gone he started to live in the street. Rich people started bullying me because I’m poor.

But one man gave me 2 million dollars at that man was Rob Wiseman. He was the richest man in the world. He owns the whole of new Zealand. Rob Wiseman told Jacob if he want stay with him for a couple of nights. Jacob made a new song called LOOK ALIVE. Look alive was so amazing he got 20 million dollars every time someone listen to it. Jacob became rich he got his house back ,he gave a extra 5 grand to the other houses and his, family moved back in and Jacob lived happy ever after. The End

Thursday, 15 September 2016

Magnus the Magnificent narrative writing

Magnus the Magnificent


Orientation:
Once upon a time there was a boy named Magnus. He lived in a town named Springfield with his mum and dad. Magnus is the only child. Magnus is an handsome young man that loved playing with his ninja stars and his large swords. At 12 am thursday the 2nd of August magnus was famous for killing a minotaur that was trying to destroying his home town . He got millions of money but instead of using the money to himself . He gave it to his family and to pay the bill for his big house. Every time magnus went out Magnus got called magnus the magnificent he would smile then start taking photos with them.

Magnus the magnificent had photos of him on the web, billboards, taxis, and houses. 1 week later he found emails on his laptop that had good news.

Magnus had the opportunity to meet Queen Elizabeth, The first family, the 2015 and 2016 nba winners the cleveland cavaliers, golden state warriors and even meet the famous Mr Wiseman. Magnus decided to go to mr wiseman because he is more famous from the others. Magnus got first class to see Mr Wiseman. Mr wiseman lives in hawaii with his wife and daughter. He is very famous for bringing back the olympics in 2016.

Problem:
When Magnus got to hawaii Mr wiseman yelled out Magnus! Magnus! Come quick, Magnus was confused Mr wiseman was wise he called Magnus just on time. Magnus ask what's the problem
There is 1 minotaur and he wanted you. They forced me to called you our else or else said magnus
I’ll die.
Good thing you called me SO WHERE IS THE 1 MINOTAUR! He is at honolulu

Solution:
Magnus had to put on his ninja suit, take out his two swords to attach to his back and his 10 ninja stars. Magnus left, He went to honolulu the minotaurs name is franky the franktastic. Franky is the best minotaur in the world. Magnus had to go because he’s was gonna destroy hawaii and he was the hardest and he was the brother that destroyed springfield. When Magnus got there He spotted franky he was in the sea waiting for him to come. As magnus came over the minotaur saw him running with his swords.

The minotaur grabbed the two swords and threw it away. Magnus was not scared she ran and threw punches but the franky blocked it. All of a sudden Franky pull out a gun and started shooting. Magnus dove under water and started thinking. She was thinking about how could she take franky down then she got the idea. She quickly jumped out of water and grabbed his ninja stars and starts throwing them it went thru the heart and out of the back. Magnus had killed another minotaur. And then magnus and the people in honolulu and even mr wiseman and his family lived happily ever after The End.

Thursday, 11 August 2016

The BFG

Last term out literary teacher Mr Wiseman read us the Roald Dahl BFG book. Yesterday our literary class and some our people went to see the new release BFG movie. I think that this movie was better then the book because they put more ideas then the book and its better watching than a person reading to you. My favourite character was the BFG because he looked after Sophie and hes very good at camouflaging in the dark and in the day time.

Image result for The BfgThe movie was different then the book because some parts in the movie was not in the book. The parts that wasn't there was the giants getting dropped of at a island with no food only snozz-cumber and snozz-cumber seeds, Sophie didn't drop her blanket, she had no glasses, they added a boy that the BFG looked after but then he got eaten by the other giant.